Alrites Presentation was over Yesterday...

Hmmm, i guess i m still a little not straight with my storyboard.
Thought i did it in the POV of the Delivery man, i haves shown what the audience are to expect in the end of my animation. That is not so right as it, doesn't put the audience in curiosity.

Even after the presentation i was a little confused on how tomake my storyboard better....

Laurie suggested that maybe, i should start from the deliveryman trying to carry the carate, n not show Charles till the end, in this way the audience together with the delivery man would be wondering what is inside the box....

I guess with Laurie's help, i can visualise my story better,
Therefore i need to start with my storyboard again.